Lady Macbeth is stronger than Macbeth himself in the beginning, she thinks killing people makes you more manly, but then she goes insane she because she helps kill some one.
You do have and extra "she" before "because." And I do think that you were supposed to write an entire paragraph on this question. But, unlike the last question, it made sense.
Good job. At the end you have three "she" i think you could have used something different. But still nice job. Allison:)
ReplyDeleteYou do have and extra "she" before "because." And I do think that you were supposed to write an entire paragraph on this question. But, unlike the last question, it made sense.
ReplyDeleteOther than the extra "she" before because, you did a great job!!
ReplyDeleteYou must be careful with thoughs "she"'s... Hehe all pun intended.
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